Homepage teaser for story on UT Torch Light Rally
Hundreds of University of Texas fans showed up
Story on flu vaccinations
First off, FluMist is spelled Flu Mist throughout the story. It is one word, two caps.
Many kids say they prefer the new way of getting vaccinated. (only one child was quoted, so "many shouldn't have been used since, well, only one child was quoted.)
"I don't like shots and I don't like needles," said student Tanner Bush
The Austin-Travis County Health Department plans flu vaccination clinics in November for people at the greatest risk for complications from the flu.
Teaser on homepage for story on first state veterans cemetery
The cemetery won't open until December, but more than
OK, there's way more typos and bad editing, but I'm getting frustrated reading this stuff. And I'm a little disappointed. Gah. Time to smoke.

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